This article was about how we, students, use the conditionals sentenses into the writing. I wrote about the experience I have undergone - the first break up.
(文章是有關於學生用假設子句(假如...，我會怎樣/不會怎樣...)去寫一篇文章。我當時寫的是第一次分手經驗(大學時期)
(感謝老師的賞識，將我的大作，刊登於校刊上，還把校刊送給我。如今回想起來，姑娘我還挺感性的呢~寫出來的東西，讓外國老師很感動啦)
Comments from my English teacher:
Excellent work. A very touching and heartfelt true story. You have used conditionals very well. You are a great writer. Would you like to submit this beautiful story to the school newspaper on disk by 05:30pm this evening, submitted to me!
(中譯: 寫得很好，非常感人肺腑的真實故事。你將假設句子(文法)運用得很好。你是個偉大的作家。你願意將這篇美麗的故事刊登在校刊上嗎?下午5:30存檔給我。)
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